Tuesday, 17 May 2016

Where does my heart lie?

The bouncy pillow shoves children off as they jump on its back.

The campsite stands still and frightened like someone's approaching it.

The pool was lying in the sun waiting for children to jump in it.

The slide was bumpy and twisty like a slithery snake stretching its long body.

The movie theatre was making lots of noise like little children screaming as loud as they can.


  1. Great work Charlie really liked the first phrase that you wrote I also liked the end which movie did you watch great work

  2. Nice job Charlie I like the personification in your work

  3. Nice job that must of been fun

  4. This piece of writing creates a strong picture in my head sounds fun! 😀